Last December wore me white
On my back it laid snow
Made my heart entirely cold
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Soul, there is great depth here. You remind me that things can seem frozen for an eternity, or seemingly for just that long. But then when movement takes hold, the advance can be sudden and overwhelming. Like summer, there are things that do not creep up on us. They explode in a flash, a passion, a moment. Well done, Soul!
Wonderful poem and a great read, friends can make the coldest days warm and loneliness can make summer feel like an ice age.
Friendship, it appears, is your favorite theme. Here, as in all your work on the subject, you more than do it justice. Memorable, Soul!
Like this my friend. Friends, true friends are the best thing in the world. Good poem.
Very beautiful writing. Friendship is one of the best parts of life. You have embodied it so well here. I love this.
Great poem, through your words it opens up who you really are these three lines say it all. Beautifully written. In heart, friend like u reside Frozen outside warmer inside Honest and respect all collide
Loved the phrase..seed of friendship... a friendship that can be ever growing. A lovely expressive poem! ; D
Well done! ! ! ! Fabulously written.... I enjoyed reading and I really like your imagery. God bless you! ! ! -Pink Butterfly-
====== Fine conceptualization and framing canvas with extravagant splash of metaphors … When LOVE blooms frozen bosom melts to souse both lovers…into rapture and rhapsodic state… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 =========
i thought his poem was very well written. keep up the good work (:
In my center heart, your name reside Frozen outside gone by warmer inside Honest meets respect, they collide Because friend like you beside.......touching expression with nice theme. A great write. Thanks for sharing.10