Monday, May 17, 2010

Frozen In Summer Comments

Rating: 4.2

Last December wore me white
On my back it laid snow
Made my heart entirely cold
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 April 2018

In my center heart, your name reside Frozen outside gone by warmer inside Honest meets respect, they collide Because friend like you beside.......touching expression with nice theme. A great write. Thanks for sharing.10

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Mj Lemon 24 March 2018

Soul, there is great depth here. You remind me that things can seem frozen for an eternity, or seemingly for just that long. But then when movement takes hold, the advance can be sudden and overwhelming. Like summer, there are things that do not creep up on us. They explode in a flash, a passion, a moment. Well done, Soul!

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Christopher Tye 21 July 2016

Wonderful poem and a great read, friends can make the coldest days warm and loneliness can make summer feel like an ice age.

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Frank James Davis 23 April 2013

Friendship, it appears, is your favorite theme. Here, as in all your work on the subject, you more than do it justice. Memorable, Soul!

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Dave Walker 26 September 2011

Like this my friend. Friends, true friends are the best thing in the world. Good poem.

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Stefanie Fontker 24 September 2011

Very beautiful writing. Friendship is one of the best parts of life. You have embodied it so well here. I love this.

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Kevin Carney 28 September 2010

Great poem, through your words it opens up who you really are these three lines say it all. Beautifully written. In heart, friend like u reside Frozen outside warmer inside Honest and respect all collide

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Loved the phrase..seed of friendship... a friendship that can be ever growing. A lovely expressive poem! ; D

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Pink Butterfly ... 29 July 2010

Well done! ! ! ! Fabulously written.... I enjoyed reading and I really like your imagery. God bless you! ! ! -Pink Butterfly-

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 28 July 2010

====== Fine conceptualization and framing canvas with extravagant splash of metaphors … When LOVE blooms frozen bosom melts to souse both lovers…into rapture and rhapsodic state… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 =========

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Samantha Collins 27 June 2010

i thought his poem was very well written. keep up the good work (:

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Whispering Rose 18 May 2010

very nicely expressed...i like it, keep up the good work

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Adam Reed 17 May 2010

oohhh dang! lol that was pretty badass :) . keep it up! ! !

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