Thursday, September 18, 2008

Frozen Heat Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was drowning in a pool of nothingness
clutching and hanging on to emptiness
buried deep in my own skin
shutting everything from getting in
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Kesav Easwaran 23 September 2008

a poem powerfully emotional...good flow of words good rhyming...'fight having questiond all wealth and birth'...a very strong phrase....good piece, Mo...i liked 10

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