Frozen Grief Comments

A touching poem. Well composed. Deep. There is a saying in Sanskrit, 'Puthra dukham dinE, dinE' which means the grief of a parent due to the loss of a son remains ever 10+

A touchingly and heart render depiction on an old widow has been made astutely. It a great philosophical poem so nicely executed.10

This is one of the most uplifting poem that i have ever read sad but raises the spirit to see such strength thanks Valsa

A very touching and soulful piece scripted so beautifully with wonderful words.....Valsa.....It really touched my heart ....10/10

An extremely impressive poem, the two deaths are too painful for a woman, first the death of her husband and second the death of her son. I have seen many women praying to die before these two deaths. You have proficiently described the pains of an old widow. I congratulate you for this great poem.

A very poignant and thoughtful write. Grief never really thaws out it just melts away very slowly and therefore the mind is never free. The aged are especially vulnerable to this sad event that must eventually happen to all. Thanks for sharing this one from he heart..

The portrayal of the life of the sad mother is so poignant and touching that one cannot finish the reading of the poem without tears. SUCH IS THE DISPLAY OF FROZEN GRIEF ! KUDOS, VALSA!

A very heart-rending and gloomy picture is emotionally drawn and imagery helps the mind to see the figure moving before the inner eye.

Sometimes our grief is frozen in time. very touching

Sometimes our grief is frozen in time. very touching

Detailed, emotional, and creative...oh thanks for sharing your sight with us, so the story here_SOul

A very piognant and beautiffully crafted poem. A joy to read.

Tragedy of life: the hope and the faith can do a tremendous work to ease the grief of any kind this is the patience those keepeth keepeth Lord very nice write heart touching

A very poignant and moving narration. This is the fate of very many elders in our society especially because of insensitive wielders of political power who are more concerned with filling their coffers than creating a socially caring infrastructure.

A precise series subtle observation composed with gentle care, for we can only imagine the weight that others carry, sorrows and losses. The palpable aesthetic of the 6th verse was outstanding.

a real story portrayed in a very touchy manner...loved the style of writing

Those who die sleep for ever. Those who live must keep awake. Reality is expressed in moving words.

very touching and moving.. i love it

Moving, really moving. A sad story reaching so deep Very well written.

very touching and poignant... as always love your poems!