Tuesday, December 28, 2004

Frozen General Comments

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I felt a little dizzy at the grave.
And there he was, so frozen to the bones.
The snow was barely sweetening the place.
So silly to now have a conversation,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 28 December 2004

Thank you both. And, Poetry Hound, I have such a huge collection of barbs still.... also, one little one was used by saying 'the' grave as opposed to 'your' grave. I assume you have not read many of mine....(I like most of them) H

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 28 December 2004

Very nice.Very touching.Thank You.

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Poetry Hound 28 December 2004

This is the best one of yours I've read. Even though he's dead, you can't resist getting another barb in - 'Don't kid yourself, you never really were.' Makes the piece more dimensional.

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