Friday, May 28, 2010

Frozen Dance Comments

Rating: 2.7

The tree is without leaves
Lifting one arm in the direction of the air
The head as if to see
The dry river bed
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Poetry enlivened and climaxed in last line, ‘In the shape of frozen dance’ Amazing dance without Ta Ra…rich imagery 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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