Frozen Beauty Comments
Splendour of a moonlit night
Lies frozen within reach.
In vacuum silence of desolate air
The mind can break its golden cage
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NICE THANK U in search of my love hope to find him ere the sunsets as he may by then be below the fathoms of the sea seeing himself bereft of me let my oarsman make haste as we have little time to waste the sun is about to set as the storm threatens too how will my lover without me do I wonder too do you MODIFY PLEASE AS PER RANJISH the sun is about to set / as the storm threatens too how will my lover / without me do / I wonder too / do you
In Search Of My Love is a poem of true love and the dilemma of lover is an eternal feeling. Nice poem full of emotion. Thank you for adoring my poem with your bright piece. Where can I read your poems? The Poet Poet ' search lead me to a sight where no poem has been posted after 2014.
most of you here are five pointers only this site is for learner poets only you claim to be learn and improve may be then come and read me
If it's a criticism and advice I thank you for being so nice If it's appreciation thank you, it's my inspiration.
This feels like it has been spoken in its purest form... Beautiful! ! !
We all have a right to live.too true. This line is so powerful and I feel like standing up and live. So much sense, both spiritual and psychological sense in here.great to read. Mohabeer Beeharry
I can almost hear the sound of roaring tree leaves upon the persistent breeze, and the freshness of the air emanating from a land far away. A really great piece!
Wonderful work, I really enjoyed reading it. It took me back to my youth in the countryside gazing into the vast starscape.
I can feel the joy rising through this poem beautiful Thank you sumit full marks
A poem that fills me with happiness. Sip the beauty and spread ourselves.... What a great line this is, Sumit. A sure fire 10 from me. Tom Billsborough
Literally speaking quite optimistic poem thanks for the share perfect 10
Sip the beauty and spread ourselves. That's the way to peace and heaven, That's the way to live with self. peace and heaven, , innocence, , , simply love this poem., thank you. tony
'Let's open the chiller door Make a drink and make up our mind, Sip the beauty and spread ourselves. That's the way to peace and heaven, That's the way to live with self.' A simple but well conceived way of living our lives with positivity.. Thank you for sharing Sumit...
The poem shows us the way as to how we should grasp and absorb the goodness of nature all around us in order to have the privilege of a peaceful and enjoyable life. Will it not entitle us to- Make a drink and make up our mind / Sip the beauty and spread ourselves.
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7/30/2025 1:02:49 PM # 1.0.0
A magnificent little write.. felt it like a song..10