Frozen Comments
My mind is like a frozen river
All my thoughts and feelings at a halt
All ideas seem to have sunk to the bottom
I need some sun to melt away this hardened edge
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Spring shall come To thaw the ice New life grows From seed to bud Great poem Jennifer
Be patient Ms. Jennifer. Sunflowers are sending you the message of hope!
Ignite your soul with love love your soul with life Colors of life will melt the frozen lake- I like the metaphor used in the poem- my 10++
I too have this hardened edge that I have to learn to let go. Having been on guard my whole life. Let us both be free, Thank you.
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7/28/2025 2:03:44 AM # 1.0.0
At times we all go thru this phase in life patience and perseverance is the only way to come out of it, A thought provoking poem, Nicely written.10++++