Frozen Poem by Jennifer Birchall

Frozen

Rating: 5.0


My mind is like a frozen river
All my thoughts and feelings at a halt
All ideas seem to have sunk to the bottom
I need some sun to melt away this hardened edge
And bring light to this life
Let this river flow free
So I can be me

Saturday, March 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings,life,river,thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 14 March 2019

At times we all go thru this phase in life patience and perseverance is the only way to come out of it, A thought provoking poem, Nicely written.10++++

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Matthew Holloway 10 March 2019

Spring shall come To thaw the ice New life grows From seed to bud Great poem Jennifer

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Amir Marandi 09 March 2019

Be patient Ms. Jennifer. Sunflowers are sending you the message of hope!

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Sekharan Pookkat 09 March 2019

Ignite your soul with love love your soul with life Colors of life will melt the frozen lake- I like the metaphor used in the poem- my 10++

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Lyn Paul 09 March 2019

I too have this hardened edge that I have to learn to let go. Having been on guard my whole life. Let us both be free, Thank you.

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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