Degrees dropping,
Ice shattering,
Like delicate glass,
In an arctic ending,
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wow. that's really good. i like it. i haven't seen snow since i was a year old, but i could see it with your poem.
Listen to the other's comments, they critiqued you fine. I suggest you edit this and make 'artic' spelled 'arctic' I am sure that you meant to...