Friday, June 2, 2006

Frostfire Comments

Rating: 4.5

It’s after midnight,
and the snow is unmarred,
free from angels and stomping feet.
The flakes that fall are like
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Tara Teeling
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Ratnakar Mandlik 29 January 2017

Heartiest Congrats on poem of the day as also for marvelously unfolding an equally marvelous manifestation of nature.

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Terry Craddock 29 January 2017

The mastery and inspiring superb perfection of this poem is emotively brilliant. so many powerful wonderful images, this is the kind of poem so many poets wish we had written, this is the kind of poem that makes us want to be poets, with beautiful insightful glimpses into varying aspects of winter chill nature.

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Love can leave you hot and cold so can snowfalls..lovely imargery...a ten from me..

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Chinedu Dike 29 January 2017

Good rendition of words, lovely poem. Thanks for sharing Tara.

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Rajnish Manga 29 January 2017

Lovely imagery. Lovers cosying up to each other to get warmth while there is snow all around. Will it ice your skin / or turn you blue? I see an invitation; / a temptation in the white.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 January 2017

Most lovely. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tom Allport 29 January 2017

a lovely poem about the temptation of letting go and enjoying the snow.

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Kim Barney 29 January 2017

Quite a different type of love poem. Congratulations for having it selected as member poem of the day!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 January 2017

Nice poem...... congrats on being selected for the day.....

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Richard Wlodarski 29 January 2017

Tara, vivid imagery throughout the whole poem. This is one of the most novel and beautiful love poems that I've read in some time. Congrats on Poem Of The Day. Well deserved!

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Ana Monnar 16 September 2007

Your writing has a certain flair of excellency. I truly enjoyed the couple of poems I read so far. Keep up the fantastic work.

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TARA...A FINE DISPLAY OF IMAGERY...WELL CRAFTED WORK SMOOTH FLUXION THROUGHOUT...JOB WELL DONE'''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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