Monday, April 16, 2018

Frostbitten Comments

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He knew that something just was not quite right.
As he tried to hold her in the night.
She was so cold to him when he touched her.
That he got frostbite.
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Lamar Cole
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Akhtar Jawad 18 April 2018

Yes, some people are so cold that they look lifeless. A beautiful poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 April 2018

Beautiful poem with touching expression. I quote..... As he tried to hold her in the night. She was so cold to him when he touched her. Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 17 April 2018

So sad he could not make her hot..Good one

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