Thursday, October 4, 2007

Frost Comments

Rating: 5.0

Frost covers fallen bridges,
As it does the ones that stand.
The whiteness settles overywhere.
It's gone when I touch your hand.
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Tom J. Mariani
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Sandra Fowler 07 November 2007

How well you speak the language of the frost. Excellent write, my poet friend. Warm regards, Sandra

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Ivor Hogg 06 November 2007

sometimes it is possible to see start of actual frost and sometimes outsiders see the beggining of the end of a marriage before the partners do themselves.

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Chuck Audette 06 November 2007

Wonderful use of imagery and metaphor here. Loved it. - chuck

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David Harris 22 October 2007

Tom, how right you are we never see the frost forming, but can always see it disappear. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Tom J. Mariani

Tom J. Mariani

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