Inclines- how much yet have I, to qualify long
Can I, but how to make, towards the inconstancy wrong
Though I smile and live sincerely there I have gone
From your memories and heart I do not belong
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I was going to write something penetrating and erudite, but I forgot what it was.
Hi dear Aabid, here you again as a selected poem from member..i guess your third or fourth this year...i wish you to have more in the future...you know why, because this poem is beautiful and many more from your collection. As i told you..you are talented, and many talented writers here reading yours...This poem is relatively telling about your heart to its high and low, in such a wonderful way of story telling...Congrats from me and keep writing great poems...No one know what future holds but we are who decided..so decide yours to be bold using pen in hands! . -Soul
Emotionally strong poem. The pain of a broken heart so beautifully composed in verse. How I wish you would come back again tomorrow In spring to bring sound to my heart that beats slow Ahh- my winter nights grow longer with griefs and sorrow when days I recall, we spend together tears would flow... is so nice. Thanks for sharing and congrats.
So beautiful and heartfelt- the expression and the feelings of a broken heart. Thanks. .........days I recall, we spend together tears would flow Gone from your memories, from deep eyes that smiled
a beautiful poem of the loss of a loved one that is full of personal regrets also? .........well written.
From deep eyes that smiled..... congrats on being chosen... a perfect 10....
Memories are often bittersweet, yet we cannot let them go in times of sadness. Eyes filling with tears of love and joy that are now lost pierce our hearts with their loss. Very intense and melancholy poem, filled with feeling and emotion. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Memories help us to move on; as we learn along. Nice work.
With such a fine expression of the feelings of love, longing and parting, the reader becomes an eye witness of a sad journey. Thanks. Though I smile and live sincerely there I have gone From your memories and heart I do not belong How I wish you would come back again tomorrow