From Your Baby Son Comments

I've just read this poem. It's so sad and touchy! You've beautifully expressed the emotions as if with a touch of personal feelings. Well done! 'I'm in the warmth of the sunlight I'm in the scent of the flowers I'm in the glow of the moonlight And the rainbows after the rain showers' These lines touch the heart and evoke sad feelings. Loved the title, loved the note. Gave it 10/10. If you have time, I'll appreciate if you would go through some of mine too and offer a word or two as feedback. My poem 'Pristine Love' earned a place among the top ten in the recently held poetry contest. You may like to start with that.