Wednesday, October 7, 2020

From Womb To Tomb Comments

Rating: 5.0

From womb, a dark place
To the world a bright place
It takes me through several stages.
Childhood wrapped in the tangerine
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M. Asim Nehal
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Soran M. H 07 October 2020

The wait and struggle to settle is the red phase While the amber makes little watchful Green making me happy go lucky Then slowing moving to the dusk of the day

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Michael Jack 07 October 2020

Very true From womb, a dark place To the world a bright place It takes me through several stages.

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Poetic Sky 07 October 2020

Like A to Zee you summed up life nicely.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 07 October 2020

Good one. One size fits all whether rich or poor. Life!

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Kostas Lagos 07 October 2020

I love this colourful description of life!

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Sandra Feldman 07 October 2020

A most original, deep, colorful and powerful poem! Enjoyed reading it as others should.

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