Tuesday, February 1, 2011

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Day In, Day out
You see the sun rise about.
The moon comes up a bit,
So you decide to take another hit.
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Ari Ryan
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Christine Blaydes 09 April 2011

I like the way that you write poetry it's so dark yet not too dark to the point that you can'tsee anything, but the point to were you can see a dim light. I like it!

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