Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, February 1, 2014

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It was simple miss in mind
Always remembered you as very kind
Never heard in life like you as female lover
So far yet heart beats were heard very near
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2014

welcome maricel remirez a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Shraddha The Poetess 01 February 2014

very nice sir................beautiful rhyming scheme........... and i also invite u to read my new one....which i wrote just a min. ago

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2014

awesome hemu guptaLess than a minute ago sir Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2014

the last two lines Guilty PleasureLess than a minute ago are greatness on their own and the poem is good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2014

Nice krishna MiddelaLess than a minute ago Nice Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2014

very good Martha GettleLess than a minute ago painted well

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 February 2014

It was simple miss in mind Always remembered you as very kind

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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