From These Ashes I Rise Comments

Keep these poems coming. great stuff.

from the ashes you will rise, via your own hands! good poetry!

I liked this poem alot, very well thought. keep up the good work.

some things are illusive...

nice poem. well versed and poignant.

The one we can be sure of in this life is... Change... Change is inevitable... Hope lives within the soul, the soul is for ever... So hope never dies... Another fantastic sea of emotions you have created... Peace and love always...

Reach out yet again and know the hand that reaches back is there to give you strength....the piercing eyes can not reach you once you rise above the darkness....blessings of healing energies surrounding you...

This is a really sad (but awesome) poem. Like Margret said, the imagery is absolutely amazingly vivid and life like. Yet, we still find a sense of hope in this poem, because we give ourselves the wings and we soar through the winds of life into something much better. Tremendously beautiful, Great write! Keep it up!

This poem is sad, yet theres pleasure in reading this poem. u crash, u rise and then again u crash. i hope there is again a rise as the title suggests. Nice poem

The imagery of this poem is so strong but I saw you flying above it like a beautiful phoenix.10

read the poem gives a good visual, words are well interwoven

I enjoyed this poem, I could imagine the scene in my head, truly a beautiful melencholic poem. ^_^ Tehehehe! : D