From The Womb Of Fire, Lauding The Newfound Dragon Queen (18) Comments
Mavros came, hovering over that vast forested roof,
Shattering a diamond sky with a wounding screech;
The smell of embers, unforgiving proof
Of the enormity of the dragon's reach.
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2) First of all the 5 Stars for you and your fantastic Ancient sequels, Captain Sir. Tom y Favourites. You added Mavros in your poems sequels, that opens the gate to a wider opening of adventureous seas, well thought-out choice, so ingeniously rendered
2) this very interesting scene reminds me of the childhood films Flash Gordon. Impressive, therefore, mysterious themes attract the youth. In the meantime, I take this comment as a tribute to your fantastic poem and sequel poems, Captain Cur
The poet's notes on the poem are very impressive, especially the child has now become a grown woman and how lovely is the heart of Mavros, he has returned her to her own people and placed her above them as their new Dragon Queen,
I also favorited it so I can reread it and remind myself what the definition of vivid is! ! !
So cinematically vivid! ! ! I see these words in image after image. Your pen is an exciting one, Captain Cur. 5 star writing!
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4) Having read your fantastic poem, I find myself in my own youth era between Flash Gordon and The Wayward Witch on Pirates Islands, I have tremendously enjoyed the new Queen's journey led by the Marvelous Mavr os, truly