Saturday, March 27, 2021

From The Womb Of Fire, Entering Into Mirren's Palace Of White Gold, (30) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Emanating deep from the spatial ice
bountiful caves of phosphorescent blue;
the air within teethed with a charming bite
laced with the husky scent of earthen dew,
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RH 29 March 2021

Red dragon in a lone kingdom....creating all destruction. Your closing stanza brings life back to sprinkle hope....that rejuvenate every thing. This is beautiful.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 March 2021

A wonderful creation! ! ! Thank you, Captain Cur, for taking us to a one of a kind kingdom. Loved the closure lines.

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Harley White 27 March 2021

A mammoth undertaking this elaborate mythology you have created! The classics resonate in these well-constructed stanzas. Your imagery is stunning and once again there are many memorable lines! In these times, your poetry is a rare find indeed!

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M Asim Nehal 27 March 2021

This poem has every ingredients to make it a perfect one. The storyline, the love, the search the magical effect, all in all a complete Masterpiece.5**

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