Emanating deep from the spatial ice
bountiful caves of phosphorescent blue;
the air within teethed with a charming bite
laced with the husky scent of earthen dew,
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A wonderful creation! ! ! Thank you, Captain Cur, for taking us to a one of a kind kingdom. Loved the closure lines.
A mammoth undertaking this elaborate mythology you have created! The classics resonate in these well-constructed stanzas. Your imagery is stunning and once again there are many memorable lines! In these times, your poetry is a rare find indeed!
This poem has every ingredients to make it a perfect one. The storyline, the love, the search the magical effect, all in all a complete Masterpiece.5**
Red dragon in a lone kingdom....creating all destruction. Your closing stanza brings life back to sprinkle hope....that rejuvenate every thing. This is beautiful.