From The Unknown Land Comments
In the land unknown
There lived two ineffable lovers
Who daily met on a bridge
Built between banks of a river.
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2 ends of shoe laces! ! ! [- -I like this phrase! heart-touching! keep wrting, my pal
wow! a remarkable and romantic poem! strong love built way ago, shattered and ended back in each others arms! great love!
wow..it made me remember my past days when I and my love.....ah! ! ! what were those days...so inseperable....nice poem buddy...great talent with a constant flow of feelings...
Good poem from one of nature's green souls...I enjoyed it.
Good poem with a nice story and mimicking melody...keep writing_Soul
Wow so romantic! Teenage love continued in adulthood..
Good poem, liked this lots. Loved the lines.. What a play of hearts and Like two ends of shoe laces
A great poem, like it. May I invite you to read my new poem called, For Bartley Gorman King Of The Gypsies.
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10/21/2025 7:33:55 PM # 1.0.0
A beautiful romantic poem. The two young lovers grew out of their initial infatuation and allowed their love to mature and ripe! Ofcourse they have to be greeted for remaining steadfast in their love all these long years! !