Monday, September 29, 2008

From The Swimming Pool Comments

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Bright, sunny, cool morning with no breeze
Above the blue, nirmal sky, not a bit cloudy,
Enclosed with buildings except on one side,
For green foliage looks peeps into the pool,
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Daniel Trevelyn Joseph
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Viola Grey 29 September 2008

funny thing is...I just returned from swimming to read this poem...I got back into the pool after 10 years and forgot how liberating laps can be....good on you for making it happen after all this time...great poem

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Rehab Helmy 29 September 2008

a very pretty one makes me feel a real summer: D I liked the line u said: for I learnt To swim after I crossed my 42nd year! that's so awesome. in fact I 'm 21 and still can't swim, lol keep writing cherry pieces and good luck

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Daniel Trevelyn Joseph

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