Sunday, July 22, 2018

From The Start Love Gio Masserati Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the start
you touched my heart
metaphorically
cosmically
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Sandra Feldman 09 December 2018

Leaves one breathless. A Masterpiece.

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Gio Masserati 19 December 2018

Thanks Sandra! Breathe! Lol! Appreciate the sentiment....a breathless Masterpiece! I accept your dear assessment. So kind-Gio

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Robert Murray Smith 22 July 2018

Too many cliches. Rewrite as it has potential.

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Gio Masserati 22 July 2018

my love is cliché... though I am banking that love's potential, in all His Glory, takes me, Just as I Am.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 July 2018

nice writing style nicely penned

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Gio Masserati 22 July 2018

Thank you!

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