A magic ball
Concealed in the orbit
Though appears small
Spreads its sight
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This is also a wonderful imaginative poem from you. A light thru your eyes. Well penned Thanks for sharing with me
great read indeed! ! ! ....hey I should say you are a great master photographer....you can capture many hearts by your hand woven poetry quilts! ! ! ! enjoyed this one.... 10++ with love shan
a very beautiful poem enjoyed the reading..10++++ A master photographer Of its own kind A visual art director Genius and inclined Telecasts various shows From studios of mind Draws a rainbow of colors All vividly bind If three are missing It is colorblind.
So, you are reading your lessons well. Jus' kidding, Sameer, a good combination of science and nature. God made Man in His own image, no wonder, each and every part of our's is so wonderful. Angel.
the eye in the socket of our heads and the eye in the socket of the constellations that watches us all. great write!
They say the eyes are the true windows to the soul and in this piece you have shown yours in a most wonderous and lovely way. Loved it. All the best, Ramona T
Another great write. YOU KNOW WHAT THEY SAY 'THE EYES HAVE IT'!
Although I much prefer metered poetry you caught and held my interest. It is a poets rask to see what ithers do not see and interpret
It's a perfect description of a 20/20 vision and that is the EYE. The eye is the window of your soul so they say. Whatever is sighted, it is recorded directly to your mind only to be recalled when needed. Over all verdict - nicely written, simple words easy to digest and therefore another excellent work.Thanks
I agree with Audrey Heller and loved the twist too! Your images, as usual, are stunning and the magic ball turned into magic poetry for me! 10 Karin Anderson
I read your poem, which has a new twist! For everything, is in the eyes of the beholder and what is seen, in their midst! Some will see everything, bright and gay. While others will, see it, dull and gray! ...10
beautifully descriptive!