Wednesday, June 3, 2009

From The Socket Of An Eye Comments

Rating: 4.3

A magic ball
Concealed in the orbit
Though appears small
Spreads its sight
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Sameer Ahmed
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Lola Sanchez 18 August 2009

beautifully descriptive!

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Marla Smith 11 July 2009

Lots of color, and life mixed in it is good reading.

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Ravi Sathasivam 21 June 2009

This is also a wonderful imaginative poem from you. A light thru your eyes. Well penned Thanks for sharing with me

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 June 2009

great read indeed! ! ! ....hey I should say you are a great master photographer....you can capture many hearts by your hand woven poetry quilts! ! ! ! enjoyed this one.... 10++ with love shan

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a very beautiful poem enjoyed the reading..10++++ A master photographer Of its own kind A visual art director Genius and inclined Telecasts various shows From studios of mind Draws a rainbow of colors All vividly bind If three are missing It is colorblind.

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Emily Core 14 June 2009

well that was a mouth full not bad.......10

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Pandian Angelina 13 June 2009

So, you are reading your lessons well. Jus' kidding, Sameer, a good combination of science and nature. God made Man in His own image, no wonder, each and every part of our's is so wonderful. Angel.

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 13 June 2009

not my favorite but it's smart and well expressed.

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Jerry Abrahamson 12 June 2009

nice poem. Keep going.

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Stephen Clark 12 June 2009

Nice imagery and insightful (no pun intended) poem

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Francesca Martin 12 June 2009

the eye in the socket of our heads and the eye in the socket of the constellations that watches us all. great write!

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djean Whitney 12 June 2009

I like it, this is great, good write10+++

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Jasbir Chatterjee 11 June 2009

Eyes often say what the rest of the body denies...

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Ramona Thompson 11 June 2009

They say the eyes are the true windows to the soul and in this piece you have shown yours in a most wonderous and lovely way. Loved it. All the best, Ramona T

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Ronell Warren Alman 11 June 2009

Another great write. YOU KNOW WHAT THEY SAY 'THE EYES HAVE IT'!

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Ivor Hogg 11 June 2009

Although I much prefer metered poetry you caught and held my interest. It is a poets rask to see what ithers do not see and interpret

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Noel Horlanda 11 June 2009

It's a perfect description of a 20/20 vision and that is the EYE. The eye is the window of your soul so they say. Whatever is sighted, it is recorded directly to your mind only to be recalled when needed. Over all verdict - nicely written, simple words easy to digest and therefore another excellent work.Thanks

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I agree with Audrey Heller and loved the twist too! Your images, as usual, are stunning and the magic ball turned into magic poetry for me! 10 Karin Anderson

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Audrey Heller 10 June 2009

I read your poem, which has a new twist! For everything, is in the eyes of the beholder and what is seen, in their midst! Some will see everything, bright and gay. While others will, see it, dull and gray! ...10

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Meghan Pearson 10 June 2009

oh goodness that was amazing..... Bravo

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