Todays Sun, Moved everso slow
It was like impatiently, waiting for tomorrow
We arrived at two, yet it was not till three
This Funeral of a young life, How could this be?
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Very moving. The stoic acceptance of death has been touchingly inscribed with nice penmanship. It is a beautiful blue poem nicely executed.
A very poignant write describing the helplessness of all the nearer people on the death of a young girl.But the have shown their strength by standing so tall at that point.
the time had came for her to part, but for every mourner, she lays in their heart. (a good dedication)
A very touching write! The stoic acceptance of death is beautifully narrated in moving language! ! A happy New year to you Lyn! !
A real tear jerker, (and yes I did cry) beautifully written tribute! X x x x x x x
As a poem it is wonderfully written but the contents creep into the heart and the sadness fills one to the core.!
We tend to forget that people die at this time of year and that their funerals still must take place. That must be very hard when it's someone young who you've known. A sad occasion, Lyn, movingly conveyed.
A very sad and moving poem Lyn, Always a tragedy when a young life is lost.
Singing let it be...surely she will hold the strength and singing may it be...will tell her how many possibility in life A nice poem with a deep vocal! _Soul
This is a wonderful poem, with so many emotions extremely well described The ending is superb.
We've been there all too frequently lately.3 young people in 2 months,2 suicides and one overdose. Not ready, yet knowing, They had to say goodbye Never ready... all too true.
Sun moves slowly from one side to another side. This smooth movement is like as we move to re-visit this beautiful poem. Amazing personality's beautiful poem shines with brightness. An interesting poem is well penned.