Friday, December 28, 2012

From The Other Side Comments

Rating: 4.9

Todays Sun, Moved everso slow
It was like impatiently, waiting for tomorrow
We arrived at two, yet it was not till three
This Funeral of a young life, How could this be?
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 October 2018

Sun moves slowly from one side to another side. This smooth movement is like as we move to re-visit this beautiful poem. Amazing personality's beautiful poem shines with brightness. An interesting poem is well penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 July 2018

Very moving. The stoic acceptance of death has been touchingly inscribed with nice penmanship. It is a beautiful blue poem nicely executed.

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Amitava Sur 10 September 2014

A very poignant write describing the helplessness of all the nearer people on the death of a young girl.But the have shown their strength by standing so tall at that point.

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Louis Rams 14 January 2013

the time had came for her to part, but for every mourner, she lays in their heart. (a good dedication)

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Matthew Peel 02 January 2013

Wow....A wonderfully written poem... Great Job!

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Valsa George 31 December 2012

A very touching write! The stoic acceptance of death is beautifully narrated in moving language! ! A happy New year to you Lyn! !

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Stevie Taite 31 December 2012

A real tear jerker, (and yes I did cry) beautifully written tribute! X x x x x x x

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Chandra Thiagarajan 30 December 2012

As a poem it is wonderfully written but the contents creep into the heart and the sadness fills one to the core.!

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Red O'mara 29 December 2012

We tend to forget that people die at this time of year and that their funerals still must take place. That must be very hard when it's someone young who you've known. A sad occasion, Lyn, movingly conveyed.

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Valerie Dohren 29 December 2012

A very sad and moving poem Lyn, Always a tragedy when a young life is lost.

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Neela Nath Das 29 December 2012

Beautiful poem with wonderful thought.Loved, really.

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Unwritten Soul 29 December 2012

Singing let it be...surely she will hold the strength and singing may it be...will tell her how many possibility in life A nice poem with a deep vocal! _Soul

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Hans Vr 28 December 2012

This is a wonderful poem, with so many emotions extremely well described The ending is superb.

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Tony Karas 28 December 2012

We've been there all too frequently lately.3 young people in 2 months,2 suicides and one overdose. Not ready, yet knowing, They had to say goodbye Never ready... all too true.

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