Thursday, October 4, 2012

From The Other Shore (Death) Comments

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A soul rose up
from a body in the night
went down the stairs
slid out the door
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Ray Quesada
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Valerie Dohren 09 October 2012

I suspect the other shore is a better place if there be one - interesting and thought-provoking write.

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Valsa George 09 October 2012

A nice little poem on death! The moment the soul leaves the body, it reaches the other shore and waves goodbye as a separate entity to the one that bore it all those years! A very meaningful write! Enjoyed reading and thanks for introducing your site! All best wishes! !

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