Wednesday, August 17, 2011

From The Moment I Saw You Comments

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I am admiring you, longingly
As love grips my heart in agony
Struck by the truth of reality, that
I, will only know you in passing
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Marcus McKinley
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Heather Wilkins 02 July 2013

excellent write. You write love at first sight. your last stanza is sweet.

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