Wednesday, May 13, 2009

From The Longing Where To Hide? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Comments

Rating: 3.6

OH THE MIND

who remind
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TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
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Afzal Shauq 15 June 2009

you raised very heartfelt questions with professional way and done the poem with sweet style as you are known for.. this is a good and interesting poem..and love these lines..meaningful enough where to hide? occupied is the heart.. is the time and the mind.. occupied.. only one who revive rusty mind well written and you got 10+++++++++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 June 2009

It is the soul-mate who can reach and occupy the rusty mind. Nice poem, lovely piece.

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Alen Alexander 30 May 2009

another of those different styles, liked it!

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Abby Mackaway 29 May 2009

a very worthwhile read, something not a lot f people would understand the true meaning of, but no worse off because of that. great job.

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Noha El3wdy 27 May 2009

i liked the style its awesome, its meaningfull thanks for sharing

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Omar Ibrahim 27 May 2009

well done! ! ! ! ! ! i like this way of writing.........10+++

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Saadat Tahir 26 May 2009

tamara its a beauty age old dilemmas done so well. its atenner cheers

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 May 2009

well expressed indeedd..liked the way you v outlined the poem great poem with depth thanks 10+++

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Eyan Desir 18 May 2009

Nice write.........................................

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Catrina Heart 17 May 2009

such a heartfelt poem, every phrase written struck the heart with words of longing! 10

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Anjali Sinha 17 May 2009

an elegant poem slow, but sure taking one to those XTCs from the longing where to hide good write

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Jessica Caswell 17 May 2009

i really like this poem...its great, more like fantastic! ! ! ! ! ! ! perfect 10! ! !

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Ashraful Musaddeq 16 May 2009

Stunning composition, love it with 10.

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Mona Martinez 16 May 2009

that was interesting. i enjoyed the style it was different and creative. :)

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Bullion Grey 16 May 2009

very interestng...not use to this but it is a lovely mind that is thinking and deciding with all it's ability! Very fine! BG

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Omar Alsadeq 16 May 2009

it was very good, keep writing!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 May 2009

who belong to my side? who could feed? empty souls? ? ? ? ? ? ? ............................ .oh what love that emanates from within, the paints of art on the wall desire riffles by dream deep soul seems to call soul mate by the..............excellent write yet ingenious betiding, heart glows terribly for the beams of moon yet to make gharden of heaven, wonderful write

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 15 May 2009

with the mate is the soul delicateand with out rusty mind, how to reach where to go how to find? from the longing where to hide? There is no hideout from the longing. Even the empty hearts and minds are full of longing. Best Wishes Naseer

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Mohammad Mahmoudi 15 May 2009

word are so meaninfull its very nice andits good 2 be a song

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Afzal Shauq 15 May 2009

a sweet poem with selective words and rich idea... and of course its one of your best poems too.. like the style you do poetry... wonderful and let me say you are the best...and you got 10 +++

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