OH THE MIND
who remind
...
Read full text
It is the soul-mate who can reach and occupy the rusty mind. Nice poem, lovely piece.
a very worthwhile read, something not a lot f people would understand the true meaning of, but no worse off because of that. great job.
tamara its a beauty age old dilemmas done so well. its atenner cheers
well expressed indeedd..liked the way you v outlined the poem great poem with depth thanks 10+++
such a heartfelt poem, every phrase written struck the heart with words of longing! 10
an elegant poem slow, but sure taking one to those XTCs from the longing where to hide good write
i really like this poem...its great, more like fantastic! ! ! ! ! ! ! perfect 10! ! !
that was interesting. i enjoyed the style it was different and creative. :)
very interestng...not use to this but it is a lovely mind that is thinking and deciding with all it's ability! Very fine! BG
who belong to my side? who could feed? empty souls? ? ? ? ? ? ? ............................ .oh what love that emanates from within, the paints of art on the wall desire riffles by dream deep soul seems to call soul mate by the..............excellent write yet ingenious betiding, heart glows terribly for the beams of moon yet to make gharden of heaven, wonderful write
with the mate is the soul delicateand with out rusty mind, how to reach where to go how to find? from the longing where to hide? There is no hideout from the longing. Even the empty hearts and minds are full of longing. Best Wishes Naseer
word are so meaninfull its very nice andits good 2 be a song
a sweet poem with selective words and rich idea... and of course its one of your best poems too.. like the style you do poetry... wonderful and let me say you are the best...and you got 10 +++
you raised very heartfelt questions with professional way and done the poem with sweet style as you are known for.. this is a good and interesting poem..and love these lines..meaningful enough where to hide? occupied is the heart.. is the time and the mind.. occupied.. only one who revive rusty mind well written and you got 10+++++++++