Monday, October 26, 2009

From The Heart Comments

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Where art thou my father?
Who cries in dishonesty.
He feels like a failure
Still deeply I love thee
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Charlotte Riley
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John Mcmanus 27 October 2009

I liked this Charlotte, it has alot of heart and you have executed it with style, I do have a few ideas on it for you, which I will relay to you via a personal message, thanks for sharing.

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Dylan Oppedahl 26 October 2009

I like this one alot. The title was great and it drew my attention.

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