Drops of rain
Jump from the sky to the ground
Wonder why they decided to do that
Wonder what they think to come here
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A soothing poem! 'Rain is the symbol of blessing' - indeed! Thanks for the 'Poet's Notes'. You may be glad to know that my poem 'Parallel Lines, Parallel Lives' has been published in the front page of poemHunter today as the 'Member Poem of the Day'. If you have some time, please read and comment.
Wow the second stanza was esp imaginative and creative in this beautiful raindrops poem. You depict in a fine poetic way, this must be one of your best poems. Kudos. Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'the corona catastrophe '
A poem that makes the reader think. In my opinion this is the major quality of a good poem. I agree with the thoughts expressed in these nice verses
Your thinking about rain is right. Really it is the symbol of blessing. It is a great gift of Nature to us. In the beginning stanza you have so brilliantly inscribed about coming of rain as...Drops of rain / Jump from the sky to the ground..In concluding stanza you have so touchingly delineated about love and kindness of rain fall. A marvelous work.
This is a beautiful image, thought, message and poem. Just pass this life while sharing what Allah blesses us with everyone. very nice poem Soul.
I concur with the wonderful thoughts of the Poet as embodied in this marvelous poem and in the Poet's Notes. A wonderful poem with a meaningful message and great images. Kindness must be the core of man's character. in this way, we will be able to establish a peaceful and unified society. Beautifully crafted and conveyed.
A great superb muse on heavenly gift of rain that inspired you superbly. This is one of your best poems indeed. Kudos! ! Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too, titled, " pink mania inking'
Drop of the rain the life of the nature, the life of seen / unseen numerous being beautiful poem penned and beautiful note
All the way from tears of joy, water that cleanses, water for life....it might be traced back to the lowly drops of rain. There is something so calming in this verse, Soul
a lessen form the gate of..strong to needy.....meaningful ideas set
This is an outstanding work.......love it........thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.