From The Garden Of Eden Comments

a very good write a nice tribute enjoyed

A great tribute to your beloved wife and crafted very lovingly with imagery outstanding.....a touching one indeed

Amitava, this is a beautiful poem to commemorate Rakhee's Birthday! ! It tells of your wonderful love together and the amazing way she cared for all of you! You definitely were blessed with a fantastic wife! Your imagery is superb, and rhythm evenly flowing. There is much sadness in this poem also, it is hard to go on living when the heart of your loved one has been wrenched from you, but you are making a good effort to keep going through your poetry. Please keep writing and telling us of your great love. Thank you for sharing, Amitava. RoseAnn

A lovely expression of love for someone who left for paradise leaving her flowers behind.

A glowing tribute to your better half. Well done.

Excellent write sir. Loved your rhyming words. Thank you so much. Regards

Like a tree she takes care of me .............to fit better with the rest of the poem i would suggest took, not takes Glowing with it's splendor and glamour .....check the use of it's :) this is a splendid tribute to your beloved. thanks for sharing. best wishes to you all. bri :) p.s. my favorite lines are: I myself and our two sons Were twinkling in that tree. i hope you three will continue to twinkle, if less brightly, in the memories you hold of your beloved. some day a new beloved may come into your life to supplement your memories.

Is it the tree of the Knowledge of Good and Evil? As the myth goes... very nice!

in the tree of love, be a flower, I like it. thanks.