Monday, August 20, 2012

From The Dust To Dust And In Between... Comments

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From the dust I came
To the dust I will go back
For the time in between, dust to dust
Let me be free
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Alok Singhal
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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 26 August 2012

very rhythmic poem, but the most important is its message. the poem sounds like a silent voice... good one.... sad but good. i wish you always to be free. because all people were born free... free in their life, actions and feelings.... and i wish you to see just light around you, have a warm heart by you)))

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Neela Nath Das 25 August 2012

Philosophical and profound. Man is born free but everywhere in chain.Death can free us from this chain.

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Elena Sandu 24 August 2012

From the middle of a herd a smile became warmer... a tied body sometimes may give to one the freedom it search for... a soul's freedom of thought and wonders. As for the real freedom we may not have untill we became dust, true... Great poem, thank you for share.

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Darkangel Flyfree 21 August 2012

I really like this one! About time that I set myself free About time I smile again About time I catch my soul to be myself again Love tha lines there! Great poem!

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