Monday, July 25, 2016

From The Diary Of A Poet Comments

Rating: 5.0

On a bright sunny day
I was drenched in a rain of thoughts
Taste of bygone my mind sought
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Nosheen Irfan
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Rob Lamberton 01 March 2023

Even on a sunny day we may fail to see the not so distant horizon. Only God can be our savior, others will fail us and cloud us if we get things out of perspective.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 October 2022

Bravo Nosheen, my dear, Bravo! ! ! !

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Fabrizio Frosini 03 March 2017

read your msg.. good.. your poem will be in the compilation (Part II.) Ciao

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Nosheen Irfan 04 March 2017

Thank you Fabrizio. I'm glad to know. Looking forward. All the best.

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Fabrizio Frosini 01 March 2017

Hi Nosheen, what about adding thi poem of yours, 'From The Diary Of A Poet', to the Anthology 'Our Chains, Our Dreams - Part Two''? Let me know if it's ok with you Cheers F.

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 August 2016

Beautiful write Nosheen. No doubt its the wonderful Diary of a poet. All the thoughts from sunrise to sunsets are clustered in pages. Loved it.

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Valsa George 02 August 2016

Life is one of sunrise and sunsets........ Both we have to accept! Beautifully worded!

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Taste of bygone mind sought, well done.10

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Nosheen Irfan 27 July 2016

Thank you Akham. Glad you like it.

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 July 2016

Hi Nosheen, A very beautiful portrayal one's inner being, memories. On a bright sunny day I was drenched in a rain of thoughts- the seemingly contrasting images of 'sunny day' and 'drenched in rain' bring out the restlessness in the mind of the poet. On the other hand, the bright sunny day is spoiled by the dark memories of forsaken roads' and 'lovers who were mistaken for saviors'. Again, in the memory stack, the poet rummages only for 'a day swallowed by clouds' and 'a night gulped by nightmares', signalling the appalling darkness the memories bring with them. The horizons of the poet, she cedes, are limited, and are tinged/colored by sunrises and sunsets, that clutter her mind. The melancholy mood has been pictured by just a few words, with exquisite ease. wonderfully simple-looking poem. but very very deep psychological reverberations. Loved reading.10++

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Nosheen Irfan 25 July 2016

Thank you so much Krishnan. I value your comments a lot. You evaluate a poem like a thoroughly professional critic of literature. Much humbled.

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Barry Middleton 25 July 2016

Memories are only sunrises and sunsets. I like it. Well done.

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Nosheen Irfan 25 July 2016

Thanku Barry for inspiring me to write on memories.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 July 2016

Life! In the rain of thoughts. With the muse of the past. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Nosheen Irfan 25 July 2016

Thank you Edward for your kind comments.

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