From The Deepest Of My Heart. Comments

a well penned and excellent write.

This was absolutely heartbreaking. Thank you for writing about this. Perhaps such tortures will end for our children and our women in this cruel world. I praise you for words well used. Thank you. Your poem was well constructed as well. The presentation was well done. Congratulations! GW62

Imagery is very clear! Well depicted poem of the torture nobody can tolerate! Hats off to you for this reminder to the world! Instead of growing the flower they are crushing it in the bud itself; it is the most unkindest cut of all!

Very poignant! It is the most unfortunate state of affairs in the temples of learning! Let us pray and hope that good sense will prevail over all the concerned! Thought provoking poem!

Ravi, How my heart breaks to know there is truth in this. Oh how it cries. This needs to be read in many cirlcles and published along with I am sure, more poems that point out other sins and injustices. Read my poem, Despair. It is about Hungry and abused children. We often feel so impotent as human beings without resources to take up action. But a poet can at least write his words and draw attention to issues. My most sincere regards for this fine work. Susan

Ravi, How my heart breaks to know there is truth in this. Oh how it cries. This needs to be read in many cirlcles and published along with I am sure, more poems that point out other sins and injustices. Read my poem, Despair. It is about Hungry and abused children. We often feel so impotent as human beings without resources to take up action. But a poet can at least write his words and draw attention to issues. My most sincere regards for this fine work. Susan

a very wise write...an universal appeal to one and all its time to get rid of forces brutal. The last verse definitely will trigger a process of social re-enigneering

children of the world, have got to be free but! it all starts with you and me. child labor should be a thing of the past maybe it's time to kick some A- -.

very very very good write.. Yes, there should be some screening on personality before selecting teachers to influence our future.

Teachers ought to be role models, They are the sculptors of future generations. If they are far behind in love and affection, Where is the future nation under construction? .............the message to be taken home..........Good Write...........

'With bricks upon the shoulders' represents two pictures simultaneously of child labour and children being pinished in a brutal manner.Nothing practically could be achieved through writings.The context of India has to achieve a lot in respect of democracy.'

very nice and true poem. teachers are suppose to be the role model for children. i hope they understand the importance of it.

True.......'Teachers ought to be role models, They are the sculptors of future generations'......school is the second home of our children, teachers are their second parents.....if there are teachers who punish students like that i suggest that there should be a yearly psychological evaluation for the teachers before the opening of the school year....Great awareness piece here........10

Yes I could not agree with you more....on the one hand we are trying desperately to promote the Education of the girl child and on the other we have torturing teachers....This sad loss of life brought tears to my eyes too as did your poem..great write

before an authorised world..truth has become silent'.....that was an excellent write i read that news too...our system of education demands the teachers to be the way they are...the school has to show results..and that's it...students are mere products with a price tag marks

before an authorised world..truth has become silent'.....that was an excellent write i read that news too...our system of education demands the teachers to be the way they are...the school has to show results..and that's it...students are mere products with a price tag marks

ur heart is full of emotion and thought.. amazing