From The Day One Comments

From the day one I had given indication I shall stand by in every occasion with dedication There was no compromise and ruled out of question... NICE RESOLVE....10

The poem sounds very cognitive, very intellectual. That may because you must use English or the influence of your culture. BTW, the marriage you refer to: did it come from a romantic relationship or a family arrangement?

Hi hasmukh, i think the phrase 'From day one' should be edited into this poem and title instead of 'from THE day one', it's a common mistake, when using english as your second or third language, Apart from that, i think this is a great poem! ! !