Sunday, April 13, 2008

From The Confines Of My Sleepy Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sky will cry the saddest tears
Is there no way to repent
And hide all my inequities?
They are mine here
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Tabitha Castillo
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 April 2008

very intriguing and meaningful................keep going

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Greenwolfe 1962 19 April 2008

A sorrowful state of being by which to live. Bravely described as it must be lived bravely as well. GW62

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Coach Roth 13 April 2008

Beautiful imagery from a sleepy mind...nice write...Coach

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Patrick McFarland 13 April 2008

A very expressive and beautiful poem.10 from me.

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Tabitha Castillo

Tabitha Castillo

Long Beach, California
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