From Tethys Late Groom Comments

Tailor... Wow! ! ........thanks! ! Love, D.

Utterly magnificent concatenation of images leading us into that barbaric ancient world and back out to Pelican green, Pelican go! Or are those worlds so close together that they shade into each other if we just look closely enough? Such a realistic creation from the world of your remarkable imagination! !

Fine poetic imagery at it's best...Well done, a deff 10 from me Hugs Nickie x x

Fantastic work Taylor, one of your best! Amazing, outstanding imagery!

O what luscious metaphoric language! A focussed eye on the natural element as you sketch realms between the tenor and the vehicle of these metaphors, yet evoking extravagant eloquence merely to brutalise it by reducing it down to size for further evaluation. Such reduction of magnificience in modern times (while alluding to the past) , elicits perhaps an academic snicker or a chuckle, as much as expresses several insights. GWG

A pictorial smorgasborg with some hitherto unknown ingredients. As the daughter of a dentist I particularly liked your 'persistent molars of a near-edentulous jaw'. The poem is also very musical in its phrasing and your image of the pale green pelican is sublime. A brilliant poem. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxx

Stunning, Tailor. Jam-packed with imagery and atmosphere, this is wonderfully crafted. Learned and intelligent, too, though this comes as no suprise of course, from your fine pen. t x

There is lots of great imagery in this one tailor, smoothe flowing, wonderful vocabulary Love duncan X

Wow, what can i say? Exquisite. Hugs Anna xxx

Tailor, you never cease to amaze me, your use of the English vocabulary is absolutely amazing. The imagry painted here is fantastic, an artiste at work. --Melvina--

TAILOR..... u WerENt KiDDiNG, wave after wave PoUnDinG On ThE DooR bY The wAvE..Mr BELL... i luvz it.......... a worthwile wait indeed... even better when i broke out the dictionary... :)

Tailor>>>POWERFULLY EXPRESSED TALE OF HARROW....STELLAR IMAGEWORK, AND APROPOS LANGUAGE WELL EMPLOYED HERE...fINE CRAFTWORK, TAILOR'''''''''''''''''f''''''''''''''''''''''F. j. R.