Sunday, September 3, 2017

From Small Road To Eternal Highway Comments

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Starting journey of life we have moved,
In a small road in deep forest of birth,
We have crawled as per fortune in life,
Basing on self efficiency we have walked.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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very lovely poem, , i really loved it...real 10 If you are not to carry any worldly treasure What kind of pleasure it can give? It is total deception and has blinded our eyes Despite the hard try we can't even see Hasmukh Mehta

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 September 2019

From small road to eternal highway Lovely allegory, life is a long journey indeed.

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Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

Small road connects to eternal highway. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Robert Murray Smith 15 June 2018

A clever write that feels right.++10

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Susan Williams 13 September 2017

Well done! ! ! I liked your presentation of life on a road trip from birth to death which is true as well as scenic! !

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Valsa George 04 September 2017

We begin our journey on Earth from a small road and we hope to enter an eternal Highway that will lead to God's palace of bliss!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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