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Yes I imagine that place just before a positive turning point in ones life. Thank you Bianca - lovely poem.

I really like this Bianca, starting over again to be focused on what steps to take in making your life a more enjoyable one, ....new beginnings opens the door to opportunity..........I hope that yours will be full of joy and fresh opportunities that build bridges to carry you along to humbleness. best wishes Jon

being dormant is OK..but wait for all the possibilities waiting for you..like a volcano dormant..it explodes wide and big and no one to stop it.. Tess

sounds like its being told from someone who just overdosed.... don't worry. i'm not judging. this is just how i felt. but i didn't completely overdose...i just got hooked. i had to start all over. from scratch. had to be a kid again... u know. sorry for the long comment... awesome write! !

i love it it shows all the feeling of a young person on a jorney to reach a long sout after goal

I like the emancipating and encouraging message of the poem and the high spirits of your poems in generall, plus - they are penned very well!

Outstanding! ! The epitome of independence. Honest and beautifully structured. One cannot help but believe every word you say and concur.

such a lovely poem, nicely penned Bianca, Vibrant color that will be my path to follow, , , , , , , , lovely expression, since i'm an artist myself so i can relate very easily to your poem. thanks for sharing and for sending your nice comments about my poem take care.