Friday, January 22, 2016

From Pain To Pen Comments

Rating: 4.5

The heart carried pain
The hand carried pen
The heart must pour out
The pen must hold
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Nosheen Irfan
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Konab Ghumman 13 March 2019

pen must hold Slowly, slowly dripping The pain became the ink, .............. deep and meaningful

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Muhammad Ali 31 August 2017

is pain an energy, transformed into another, a poem! this poem describes such feeling beautifully. and also the heart lost its weight... true

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Valsa George 01 February 2016

Pain translated into words The heart lost its weight And the paper was heavy With the burden of words. What a splendid barter! The cathartic effect of writing poems is so beautifully illustrated here!

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The therapeutic value of poetry is here excellently expressed!

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Powerful poem that you have penned my friend! Pain is often the birthplace of not only poetry but greatness!

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M Asim Nehal 22 January 2016

Awesome....Heart and body...pen and pain.... A nicely knitted poem...Love it....100++

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 January 2016

Wickedness! ! With the pains of the world. Thanks for sharing.

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