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Sir, it's a nice read for me. A well thought element used in a poem. Poetry has lots of freedom and possibility and this is an example. Thank you for making poem (life) more than numbers. Respected! Eagam Khaling, Darjeeling Jan 11,2014

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Some Girl You might find this interesting The core of Krishnamurti's teaching is contained in the statement he made in 1929 when he said 'Truth is a pathless land'. Man cannot come to it through any organisation, through any creed, through any dogma, priest or ritual, not through any philosophical knowledge or psychological technique. He has to find it through the mirror of relationship, through the understanding of the contents of his own mind, through observation and not through intellectual analysis or introspective dissection. Man has built in himself images as a fence of security - religious, political, personal. These manifest as symbols, ideas, beliefs. The burden of these images dominates man's thinking, his relationships and his daily life. These images are the causes of our problems for they divide man from man. His perception of life is shaped by the concepts already established in his mind. The content of his consciousness is his entire existence. This content is common to all humanity. The individuality is the name, the form and superficial culture he acquires from tradition and environment. The uniqueness of man does not lie in the superficial but in complete freedom from the content of his consciousness, which is common to all mankind. So he is not an individual. Your poem made me think of this concept :)

Wtevr I love it. It makes me think.

Dear Sir! 10 on 10! .................technically shoothing with beautifull words.............loved it

good Khushi Singh3 minutes ago very imaginative 2 write such a poem Comment +1 How we continouskly blame others for our own actions.

Kera Hart3 minutes ago It was very truthful.

One represents loneliness Two represents togetherness