From Now Until It's Now Again
I'd like to be a drop of rain,
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The code for this comment begins 333 and #333 is personally significant to me, so I'm assuming this comment will be delivered. // What a charming and universal refrain! I'm imagining your voice reciting it with a slight variation to highlight each new example of its relevance to multiple experiences. But the four sections of the poem all emphasize your desire to intervene between other people and possible pain. It's a triumph of compassion pure and simple, wanting to reign not to have power over someone else but to ease their suffering. It give me hope, increases my faith, makes charity accessible. Can a brief poem do all these things? Yes, yes, yes.
Thank you, dearest friend! I read your letters and I had to smile about your fight with technology (here we are siblings!) ...Like always you capture the essence of my soul and my desire to pour it in a poem...Blessed you be!
Time, Father of the mighty Vane, make seconds sleep outside of gain, stand still for all that is humane! From now until it's now again. a very fine poem on time........ you are very original in your thinking and in your presenting. tony
Thank you for your kind thoughts...it helps me greatly!