Friday, May 6, 2016

From My World You Make Me Go Comments

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From my world you make me go on
Since yesterday I drawn in my cry ocean
In dark world they put me on
Seems to be just an abundant
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Nadia AMRANE
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Hadil Diaf 17 May 2016

Loved your poem, loved your emotion and all you poured in, keep on Nadia, bless you

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Amrane Nadia 02 June 2016

thank u happy that u liked

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Tom Billsborough 06 May 2016

My ocean makes me perfect swimmer Against wind stronger. Very much liked these two lines. Good effort overall, Nadia

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Amrane Nadia 06 May 2016

thanks Tom

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 May 2016

is there any new beginning for me i am burning inside. i am swimming against strong winds. a powerful poem on determination..... be determined. come what may, you are going to win even when you hve to swim against strong winds. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Amrane Nadia 06 May 2016

yehhhh dear, your words touch me deeply I like your comment as if it is a poem write it in a poem please

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