From my world you make me go on
Since yesterday I drawn in my cry ocean
In dark world they put me on
Seems to be just an abundant
Never my right I let
And my war I led
Unfortunately with no luck
Which make inside me huge lack
Can I figurate any solution
Underlining strong revolution
You symbolize no humanity
or sort of generosity
just erased me
further killed me
Is there any new beginning
For me always burning
My ocean makes me perfect swimmer
Against wind stronger
My ocean makes me perfect swimmer Against wind stronger. Very much liked these two lines. Good effort overall, Nadia
is there any new beginning for me i am burning inside. i am swimming against strong winds. a powerful poem on determination..... be determined. come what may, you are going to win even when you hve to swim against strong winds. thank you dear poetess. tony
yehhhh dear, your words touch me deeply I like your comment as if it is a poem write it in a poem please
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Loved your poem, loved your emotion and all you poured in, keep on Nadia, bless you
thank u happy that u liked