From My World You Make Me Go Poem by Nadia AMRANE

From My World You Make Me Go

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From my world you make me go on
Since yesterday I drawn in my cry ocean
In dark world they put me on
Seems to be just an abundant
Never my right I let
And my war I led
Unfortunately with no luck
Which make inside me huge lack
Can I figurate any solution
Underlining strong revolution
You symbolize no humanity
or sort of generosity
just erased me
further killed me
Is there any new beginning
For me always burning
My ocean makes me perfect swimmer
Against wind stronger

Friday, May 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: cry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hadil Diaf 17 May 2016

Loved your poem, loved your emotion and all you poured in, keep on Nadia, bless you

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Amrane Nadia 02 June 2016

thank u happy that u liked

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Tom Billsborough 06 May 2016

My ocean makes me perfect swimmer Against wind stronger. Very much liked these two lines. Good effort overall, Nadia

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Amrane Nadia 06 May 2016

thanks Tom

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 May 2016

is there any new beginning for me i am burning inside. i am swimming against strong winds. a powerful poem on determination..... be determined. come what may, you are going to win even when you hve to swim against strong winds. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Amrane Nadia 06 May 2016

yehhhh dear, your words touch me deeply I like your comment as if it is a poem write it in a poem please

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