Saturday, October 29, 2016

From My Window Comments

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From my window I gazed on a lily
That was denied rain and sun,
Always looking heavenward with trust,
Pleading for mercy, but finding none
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Bharati Nayak 01 November 2016

The slighted lily, the forsaken bird, How cunning the mind can be! My own pain, so cleverly disguised Fills my mirror, staring back at me - - - - - - - - - - Wow- - - - -How wonderfully your poem mirrors the pains of loneliness! ! Thanks for sharing this marvelous write ]

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Offeliya Seema 29 October 2016

From my window I gazed on a lily That was denied rain and sun, Ever looking heavenward with trust, Soon her days of suffering were done very nice poem

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