Tuesday, June 2, 2009

From My Sick Bed Comments

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over my window sill
i gaze out at the moody moon,
pass by.
from my sick bed, i see,
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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 16 June 2009

Small small things create great happy things in us. You have very keenly observed and captured the scene in this poem in a very skillful manner. Kudos.

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