From my room
I watch as evening descends upon
The dusty street
A long journey of
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Reading your poem, I felt myself young and full of the excitement of being alive, safe in my own space, with the world all around to discover again.
This is a vivid image of twilight coming to the street. This is a very enjoyable work. Thank you for sharing it with us.
I am glad you enjoyed this poem and thanks so much for support.
well and spontaneous flow to draw the nature......really the imagery drawn is the strength of this poem.... as a reader as if I after a long time look to the sky and enjoy....
Sometimes all pains vanish by watching nature. It has such a great soothing effects.Thanks.
A superb description of these magical moments of twilight Good poem!
Thanks very much for taking time to read and giving comment. Regards.
The view of the setting sun and the evening light falling on the dusty road and the spreading of darkness seen through your window, , , , , ! Picturesque!
My heartfelt gratitude. Your comment is very inspiring.