Monday, August 1, 2005

From My Heart Comments

Rating: 4.8

How could such a beautiful soul,
Be so missunderstood?
Dealing with family who mistreats you,
Dealing with more than you ever could.
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Kiersten Reilly
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 01 August 2005

Hi Kiersten! I like this a lot! it's nice! Suggestion: check the spelling of 'misunderstood'...'But your low self esteem...' (check the your) ..Now, 'So 'hen'? ? did you mean 'when'...I hope so. It makes for a better read if you did! Nice work. LSP

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