Saturday, April 7, 2018

From My Heart To Your Eyes Comments

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In a night show of the milky lights, the blue back ground,
Song of the moon, dance of stars, me on the Milky Ways,
Calm and stillness, no noise, no traffic, no pungent fumes,
No suffocation, a man has speaks, machines are silent,
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 April 2018

A wonderful and moving poem with compelling imagery. Quot I I see a moon in your face and blue stars in your eyes Quot. Beautiful words from a marvelous poem.10

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Andrew Blakemore 07 April 2018

a very descriptive piece full of wonderful imagery.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 April 2018

So moving and inspired. A great work you have done Akhtarji. Many many thanks.

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Wonderful writing Akhtar Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Savita Tyagi 07 April 2018

Beautiful and moving words coming straight from a poetic heart. So tender and heartfelt. Thank you for sharing Akhtarji.

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Akhtar Jawad

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