Thursday, August 28, 2008

*** From My Heart *** Comments

Rating: 4.1

My sweet heart seeks refuge
Knitting to your affirmer wools
Escalates desire so profuse
Licking up your morning drools
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Exasperation 24 December 2019

It just clings to me, your too good to be true.......unbelievable!

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*_sakura ~daisy_* 30 July 2009

hmmm this poem.....lights my eyes like the fireflies glowing above the starry sky....showering a sense of hope....hmm.....this poem puts me at ease.....i can feel the love.....see it with my own eyes.....its a precious thing to have to hold in ones hand....and feel....days passing so fast with your loved one...slowing down to remember and cherish..i know thisa feeling so well...hmmm.......fantastic poem......keep writing.............................

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wonderful poem and heart..for a love n the coming years and the same love which became a past...

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Alex Badion 16 May 2009

Wonderful! Thank you for writing such a nice piece of your writing prowess! Keep up the good work dear friend!

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Samweli Butobi 31 January 2009

good written, wonderful poem and passitonate, that is good of you, always keep u

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Mimi Fakhira 29 December 2008

What I'm about to say is truly 'From My Heart'. You are an amazing poet! Very nicely written, deep with a special meaninig. Love and compassion decorates the walls of this poem. A 10!

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Jordan Phoenix 30 November 2008

very intense. verbally pictoral.

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Madison Yeater 29 November 2008

very beautiful. i love it.

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Sulaiman, this is straight from your heart and this is why it is a really brilliant poem. Thank you. Karin Anderson

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Jerine James 24 November 2008

good one sulaiman.. keep writing

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Maxislam Beauty 06 October 2008

Kingdom is coming from love, Jesus and Mohammed spoke of love, whilst the modern man is thinking of felonies and idiocy, whilst love came from heart of Faithfulness and Life.

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Maxislam Beauty 06 October 2008

This is a great understanding that will make us have a New World, those who love truth embrace these words than lies, great job, lovely piece that is more faithful and true.

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Wangui Mukiri 27 September 2008

Sulaiman, that is a marvelous piece. Truely refreshing.

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Nosherwan Khan 19 September 2008

Beautiful piece of poetry.

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Cyclopseven R 13 September 2008

From the centre of existence, you speak the truth honestly. I enjoy reading this Sulaiman. Keep up the good work.

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Ameer Mcarthur 13 September 2008

Here another great piece from you Sir.I can say you're truly one of the modern day great and awesome poet!

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Sharese Speller 11 September 2008

this is so amazing your really good

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Ben Gieske 10 September 2008

You have your unique style and it will take me a while to adjust to it. “Knitting to your affirmer wools” - appreciate your originality “You’re my Bee and Mocking Bird “ - enjoyed your metaphors here. “We groom and glow” - I like this.

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 10 September 2008

Sulaiman, I can feel the love! Dorothy

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Kelly Curiel-bowser 09 September 2008

this is a very nice poem....very long too, its great to be able to keep a poem going!

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